出国英语培训 · 选择新航道

广州新航道 > 雅思学习 > 雅思小作文地图题

雅思小作文地图题

编辑:    发布日期: 2019-08-12 15:25:08   浏览:

收藏

支招雅思小作文地图题——引入一个visitor (第三视角):句型可以更多样、摆脱单调机械的“东南西北”表达、有些措辞和描述从而变容易、路线比方位更有“情境感。


《剑 14》Test 4


《剑 14》Test 4


高分范文及解析


The two maps, as they are put together, show how Grange Park now is different from it was in 1920.


In 1920, visitors could enter the park from either the Arnold Avenue entrance or the Eldon Street one and would see a fountain in the park’s center. West of the fountain was a musical stage, and on the north and south sides of the stage were rose gardens with seats in the vicinity. Visitors would see another rose garden in the east, by the Arnold Avenue entrance, a pond for aquatic plants in the northwestern corner, and a glasshouse by the Eldon Street entrance with seats nearby. [注意:“visitor视角”写法并不意味着抛弃描述方位,“第三视角”是“描述东南西北”的补充。]


[写出与历史情况的关键区别。注意:关键区别 (main features) 即可,无需面面俱到。] Now, the fountain is gone, and now there is a square rose garden with seats on its four sides. Second, the musical stage is upgraded to an amphitheater for concerts. In addition, visitors entering from Arnold Avenue will see a café and a children’s playground in the corner on their left, and if patrons enter from Eldon Street, they will see a water feature on their right. It is also notable that there is an underground car park near the water feature.


[地图的综述很好写,就写变化程度的大小] Clearly, the park has changedimmensely.


《剑 13》Test 1


《剑 13》Test 1


高分范文及解析


The two maps illustrate the changed [改造类地图的核心就是change] road access to a city hospital in 2010 compared with 2007.


In 2007, the hospital was in the loop created by the Ring Road and accessible only from Hospital Road, which had an intersection with City Road. A visitor should go north on Hospital Road to enter the building and would see a number of bus stops on both sides of the road. If the visitor arrived by car, the car should turn east at the northern end of Hospital Road and would find the car park on Ring Road. [写出“路线感”]


In 2010, a visitor could take basically the same pathway [描述了两个图之间的关系], despite the few major developments in front of the hospital building. A visitor, going north, would need to pass the roundabout to go on Hospital Road and see a bus station on the left as the replacement of the bus stops, and the car park on the right became only for the staff’s vehicles. Going down the road, there was another roundabout whose eastern exit, on Ring Road, led to the public car park on the east side of the hospital building. [写出“路线感”]


Overall, the change was marked.


学习雅思、托福、ALEVEL,选择新航道!

如果对我们的课程想了解更多,欢迎在线咨询或拨打电话预约试听。

免责声明

1、如转载本网原创文章,请表明出处;

2、本网转载媒体稿件旨在传播更多有益信息,并不代表同意该观点,本网不承担稿件侵权行为的连带责任;

3、如本网转载稿、资料分享涉及版权等问题,请作者见稿后速与新航道联系(电话:020-85647182),我们会第一时间进行处理。

推荐课程

优质师资

备考心得

精品项目

封闭学院

寒暑假全托管雅思、托福

考研+留学双保险

就读国内外TOP100名校的学员而设

学霸计划

VIP一对一定制

卓越计划

能力与成绩齐头迸进

腾飞.美国名校

申请美国TOP100名校的初高中生

锦秋.G5名校

开启英联邦G5名校之门

硕博直通车

北美/英联邦名校研究生深造

飞跃.国高备考

入读优质广深国际高中

注册/登录

+86
获取验证码

登录

+86

收不到验证码?

知道了

找回密码

+86
获取验证码
下一步

重新设置密码

为您的账号设置一个新密码

保存新密码

密码重置成功

请妥善保存您的密码
立即登录

为了确保您的帐号安全

请勿将帐号信息提供给他人/机构