雅思考试2月12日雅思大作文真题解析

雅思考试2月12日雅思大作文真题解析：2月12日雅思大作文真题参考范文|自己花还是留给孩子？  

2022年2月12日雅思大作文题目：

Insomecountries,oldpeoplewhoretirefromworkspendthemoneyonthemselves(e.g.holiday)ratherthansavemoneyfortheirchildren.Isitapositiveornegativedevelopment?  

高分范文及解析  

Introduction  

Nowadays,anincreasingnumberofretireesopttoallocatetheirsavingstobetteringthequalityoflifeinsteadofputtingasidemoneyfortheiroffspring.Personally,thistrendisgenerallyadvantageous.  

解析  

农历新年后的第 一场考试，就迎来了新题。话题也很有意思，联系现实，会发现讨论的话题就是时代更迭带来的观念碰撞。注意：老人花钱在自己身上，题干里还进行了提示“holiday”，相当于暗示钱是花在“提高生活质量”上，未防止走题，建议顺着“holiday”这个举例的思路走，不要强调把钱花在“刚需”上，比如医疗，也不要提“减轻年轻人赡养老人的压力”。  

☑retireen.退休者  

☑putasidev.省下,储存;留出  

Body1  

Insomepartsoftheworld,itisatraditionalconventionthatpensionersshouldsetasidemoneyfortheirchildren,whichindicatesthattheaforementionedtrendmaybringcertainlosses.Themostevidentoneisthatsuchpracticewilltosomeextentexertanegativeimpactonthecohesionandconnectionsbetweentheyoungandtheold.Toillustrate,thevastmajorityofyoungergenerationsarestrugglingwiththesurginglivingpressure,andthesavingsoftheoldcanalleviatesuchburden,tacklesomefamilyfinancialcrisispoppingup,andevenguaranteethelatergenerationsabetterlivingcondition.Incontrast,spendingmoneyforpensioners’ownbenefitmaytriggertheirchildren’sdissatisfactionandgrumblesundersomecircumstances.However,thisisnotalwaysthecase.  

解析  

给家庭关系带来负面影响：[对比论证]年轻人面临大压力：钱留给年轻人可以缓解压力，应对突发的家庭财政危机，甚至给后几代都提供更好的物质基础；而老人自己花钱，不对子女伸以援手，则可能引起子女不满。  

☑pensionern.领取养老金[退休金]的人  

☑setasidev.留出,拨出(时间、金钱等)  

☑exertvt.运用[权力];施加[影响力]  

☑cohesionandconnectionsn.凝聚力和人际关系  

☑alleviatevt.缓解  

☑popupvi.突然发生  

☑triggervt.触发，引发  

☑grumblen.[C]抱怨  

Body2  

Asamatteroffact,moreoldagepensionersspendmoneyonthemselves,suchastravelling,andbehindthisphenomenonaremoregains.Thefirstoneisaboutsafeguardingtherightoftheoldtomaketheirowndecisions.Whatusuallyoccursinrealityisthatoldparentsarepressurisedundertraditionalconventionstobechildren-centredandtoputtheiroffspring’sbenefitontothetopagenda.Thisisactuallynotfairtotheold.Theyhaveworkedhardintheirearlylifetoaccumulatetheirownwealth,andnaturallytheyoughttoenjoytherighttofreelyspendtheirsavingsintheirlatelifeonwhateverdefinesthem.Besides,spendingmoneyonthemselvescanalsosatisfyretirees’spiritualdemands.Itisacommonplacethattheoldwerewrappedupinboththeirworkanddomestictrivialitiesintheearlyyears,anditisafterretirementthattheyareallowedtosmelltheflowersandengagethemselvesinwhattheytrulylove.Meanwhile,comparedwithsavingmoneyfortheirchildren,whichmaydemotivatetheyoungtodevotethemselvestowork,spendingmoneycanspurtheyoung’sdiligence.  

解析  

老人给自己花钱的好处：1.保障自己做决定（花自己钱）的权利；2.满足老人自己的精神需求  

☑safeguardvt.保护  

☑pressurisesb.todosth.强迫  

☑putsth.ontothetopagenda把…放在首位  

☑bewrappedupinsth.忙于某事而无暇顾及其他事  

☑domestictrivialitiesn.家庭琐事  

☑smelltheflowers休息一下，享受生活  

☑diligencen.勤勉  

Conclusion  

Inlightoftheabove,despitesomeabove-mentionedcases,retireesoughttohavetherighttospendtheirmoneyfreelyonwhatevertheylike.  

解析  

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