《剑13》Test 4雅思写作小作文地图题参考范文

Cambridge Past Papers Vol.13 Test 4

《剑13》Test 4地图题

审题与解析：

剑13的第四套测试题的小作文（地图）是一道非常典型、非常基础的地图题模式，主要的大变化为改建或新增。

由于这篇地图题的模式比较传统，因此本地图题的写作难点不在是Task Achievements而更多层面往其他三个评分标准上倾斜。

若是简单地使用地图题的一般套句来描述相应的地图题中所呈现的变化，比较难写得出彩；换句话说，词汇的准确与灵活使用，语法表达的自然与多样在行文中将显得较为重要。

雅思小作文范文：

段：改写题目并点出主要的变化区域

The two maps illustrate the planned changes of a university’s sports center based on its current conditions.

第二段：按照箭头的指向，先描述入口区域的变化，从变大的部分开始着手进而写到小变化。

First, the entrance hall and the reception area will be expanded, with a sports shop and a café in the west and east corners. However, the central area of the premises will not change enormously, except that the gym will be extended eastward. The 25-meter swimming pool, the changing room and the seating space will remain the way they are.

第三段：由入口区域转向至东西方向的区域，承接上一段的思路，先写大变化后写小变化，期间可以通过一些连接词，给考官反映出写作逻辑顺序。

Immense changes will happen to the outdoor courts that are now independent of the central area. Replacing the west court, a leisure pool and a changing room on its south will be built. The east court will also be removed, and where it is now, there will be a number of facilities. First, a sizeable sports hall will share the wall with the seating area of the 25-meter pool. Second, directly opposite the sports hall, there will be a pair of dance studios. In addition, a changing room, closely adjacent to the café, will be built in the southeast corner.

第四段：固定操作部分：描述变化的幅度以及变化后的突出特点。

Overall, the sports center will have greater versatility.

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