雅思写作小作文范文及解析

雅思写作小作文表格类题目范文及解析一文以一篇雅思小作文中表格类型题目的范文为例子，对此范文进行了赏析。告诉了我们雅思写作的作文题目应该怎样写。很多同学认为雅思的小作文在所有类型当中，算是简单的，但是真正能写好雅思小作文的又有几个。今天我们就以一篇典型的静态表格类的作文题目为引子，为大家展示这一类的作文应该怎么写。

【题目】

The table gives information about students' opinions on different aspects of courses they attended in a university in 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Percentage of students rating aspects of their course as "very good".

本题是典型的 静态数据表格题(table)，对比了三项课程在五个不同方面获得满意评价的百分比(percentage)。

表格题的特点是数据量较多，且数据大小关系不直观，不如折线图、柱状图和饼状图来得一目了然，因此在分析数据时需要适当多花一些时间，寻找其中的大小关系和规律。

【范文】

The table shows how students feel about a variety of aspects of courses they took in university in 2012.

这张表展示了学生们对2012年在大学所学课程的不同方面的感受。

Among the three given courses, the aspect of business earned more appreciation from the students than the other two. In terms of teaching quality and tutor support, the rating as "very good" reached 93% and 96% respectively, which were the highest compared with computing and maths. The percentage of satisfactory comments for course content and resources were also higher than average level.

在三门课程中，商科方面比其他两门获得了更多的学生的赞赏。在教学质量和辅导支持方面，“非常好”的评分分别达到了93%和96%，分别高于计算机和数学。对课程内容和资源满意的评论百分比也高于平均水平。

As a contrast, the rating for the aspect of computing as "very good" was lower than average concerning pre-course information (61%), tutor support (85%) and course content (69%). The students also did not think highly about the teaching quality and resourses.

相比之下，课前信息(61%)、导师支持(85%)和课程内容(69%)在计算机方面的评分为“非常好”，低于平均水平。学生对教学质量和资源的评价也不高。

The number of students who were satisfied with the pre-course information of the maths course was slightly more than business and computing. However, the teaching quality was only recognized by 64% of the students, which were much less than those of business and computing. The situation was similar for resources.

对数学课前信息满意的学生人数略多于对商业和计算机的满意。然而，教学质量只被64%的学生认可，远远低于商业和计算机专业的学生。资源方面的情况也类似。

All in all, business was the most welcomed course among the students. Besides, among the five categories, students are more satisfied with the teaching quality and tutor support than the others.

总之，商科在学生中是的课程。此外，在这五个类别中，学生对教学质量和导师支持的满意度高于其他类别。

【解析】

本题中，如果将三门课程横向对比可以发现，business得到的赞赏高于平均水平：除pre-course information列第二之外，其他各项都居于榜首。而computing和maths分别都有满意度的项目。

此外，观察各项目的和最小值可发现，学生在teaching quality一项的满意度非常悬殊，business高达93%，而的maths仅为64%。这就是典型的需要额外描述的special feature，同学们在审题时要敏锐地发觉，并单独进行描述。

最后，除了不同课程之间的对比之外，还需要在相同课程的不同评分类别直接进行大致的比较。观察后可以发现，学生给出平均分的项目是teaching quality与tutor support，平均达到80%-90%，而其他几项则明显不足了。这一点可以在正文中单独起一段进行描述，也可以在结尾段一笔带过。

我们可以看出表格类的雅思小作文在写作中，重在寻找表格内的数据异同点，并对这些异同点进行描述。也就是我们所说的对于极值的描述和相同值的描述。要想搞清楚表格数据的异同点，我们首先就要搞清楚表格的行和列分别代表什么意思，也就是它们的维度