实例讲解两步四句法巧破托福写作

托福的写作部分历来是我国考生的强项。正因如此，在写作部分，备考托福想拿高分的同学们更是不能掉以轻心。在托福独立写作中，想要清晰的确立文章的思路内容和主题，最为关键的便是怎么写好他的最初。在文章最初的部分，我们又该关注到哪些问题呢？今天结合实例侧重介绍托福独立写作两步四句开篇法，期望能为大家的托福写作带来协助。

一般来说，开篇阶段的写作可分为两大过程：

榜首步便是用简洁明了的语句对原标题的意思进行同义替换；

第二步是提出自己的观念。

这两大过程细化起来可以归纳为四句话：

榜首句，选用同义替换的方式对原标题的意思进行更改，当然是“形变神不变”；

第二句，对标题的意思进行解说；

第三句，提出自己的观念；

第四句，归纳自己所提出观念的理由，引起下文。

下面结合一些比较容易出错的标题来解说“两大步，四个语句”的具体运用办法。

事例1：误解原意思。

Do you agree or disagree: Because people are busy with doing so many things, they can do few things well?

Original：

Some people may hold the view that they are able to do things well even if they are busy with doing so many things simultaneously or during a given period. Although plausible at the first glance, I disagree with the statement. Depending on my own personal experience and personality, I firmly maintain that people can do few things well when they are busy with doing so many things. My arguments of this opinion are listed as follows.

解析：

文章榜首句话不是对原标题意思进行解说，而是选用采取了和原意思相反的做法来进行标题诠释；第二句标明自己对误解标题的观念；第三句话对自己的观念进行近一步的解说；第四句一个过渡性的语句。开篇内容组织却是很好，但是作者犯了误解原标题意思的错误导致后边整个文字都做了无刻苦。

Revised:

When people are engaged in a large extent of work simultaneously, they will not be able to perform all of them perfectly. Just imagine how terrible it will be: too many jobs need to be done by the same person in a given time. Once such a picture appears in my mind, I feel dizzy. To me, it is impossible to do everything well with the limited energy and many others factors .Therefore , I agree with the statement too many things to be done at the same time cause few to be well done . The reasons are as follow.

榜首句话对原标题意思进行了很好的诠释；第二、三句话进一步解说原标题；第四句话提出自己的观念；第五句话过渡性语句引起下文。

事例2 ：语言罗嗦，绕弯子给出自己观念，浪费时间。

Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Original：

With the development of science and technology, people’s living standard has been improving day by day. According to the family plan, one couple could have only one child. So child becomes the center of the whole family. Some of them are even spoiled. Therefore, I think it is better if the young adult could live independent from their parents as soon as possible.

解析：

这个最初看似没有任何问题，但是仔细分析就会发现许多问题。首要，作者绕了个大弯才给出自己的观念。其次，观念是对原标题的誊写，改动的比较少。最终，开篇短少引起下文的过渡句。更大的错误是这个最初更像是一个全文首要观念的一个分观念。

Revised:

As we all know, some young adults have the sense of independence in a special period so that they want to choose to live apart from their family, while others still choose to stay with parents in the family. Family can provide young adults a warm bay where he or she could turn to whenever any problems arise. However, considering the sound development of the young adult both mentally and physically, I think to live independently the earlier, the better. Independence is a lesson that each of us must face one day. The detailed reasons are listed below.

解析：

榜首句话诠释原标题意思；句话进一步解说榜首句话；第三句话提出自己的观念；第四句话解说自己的观念，引出下文。

经过以上的范例，同学可能对这个办法有了或多或少的理解。还期望同学们经过演练，更好的把握这个技巧。

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