托福独立口语高频话题：互联网改变生活

考生在备考独立口语时常会遇到的一个问题是缺乏专业靠谱的权威人士来为自己批改答案。大家可能练习了不少独立口语话题，但因为缺乏有效批改，就连自己也不知道练习到底有没有成效。下面小编就来为大家分享一些来自托福老师对独立口语高频话题学生答案的专业批改。

本期托福独立口语高频话题

How has the availability of the worldwide Internet changed people's life?

学生对此话题的表述答案

on my daily life, I would say the increasing of ability of internet is the most important advancement in our life. It makes people's lives ever more convenient and colorful. For example, when I need to find the answer of the queston, it is as simple as putting the key words into the search box, and then I could check all the information below the box. By contrast, it is hard to find the exact piece of information from hundreds of pages in traditional way. Secondly, it provides us sufficient resource to support our daily lives, such as news on the internet and the latest results from the research.

托福老师批改意见

发音部分需注意的几个词(Pronunciation)

1 it

2 makes

语法方面出现的错误(Grammar)

1 the increasing of ability of internet————the increasing capabilities of the internet

2 it is hard to find the exact piece of information from hundreds of pages in traditional way————it is hard to find specific piece of information in the traditional way of looking through hundreds of pages

表达部分存在的问题(Expression)

1 I could check all the information below the box.————I can look through all the information below the search bar.

2 latest result from the research————latest research results.

此高频话题高分口语模板分享

The internet is the most important advancement in mordern life. The internet makes people's lives ever more colorful and convenient. When searching for information, we can use a search engine where we all have to do is to put the key words into the search bar and then look through the information below the search bar to find what we need. It used to be much harder to find specific information the traditional way of looking through hundreds of pages and books. The internet not only makes research more convenient for us, but it keeps us updated about the news all over the world. It also keeps us updated on different kinds of research. Internet access changed many people's lives in many crucial ways.

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