雅思写大作文，你还在用with the development of…开头吗？

雅思写大作文，你还在用with the development of…开头吗？

现状背景法在中式思维的影响下，烤鸭们比较偏爱的一种议论文开头写法是现状背景法，即指出一种社会现状或一个场景，再对其做一番阐述。

例如：With the development of society or economy…是不是经常就出现在你的作文开头？快住手吧，考官们闭着眼睛都能猜出后文了！

其实这类方法不是不可取，而是要摆脱模板，根据当下的作文题目进行调整，写出自己的个性化和创新性。

一般来说，操作步骤如下：

S1：the present situation (background)

即描述背景

S2：further explanation of the present situation

即引到话题，并改写题干

S3：give your own opinion or say what you are going to do in your essay

即表明个人观点（辩论型题目）或揭示写作目的（报告型题目）

真题举例

In the past, knowledge was stored in books, but now it is stored on the Internet. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

改写后：

S1: We certainly live in an amazing technological era. ( 描述背景 )S2&S3: In the span of two generations, we have transitioned from having the majority of all recorded information stored in books to having it stored on the Internet. Many decry this as a dangerous practice that could result in the loss of all data in the event of a catastrophe, but others think that this risk is worth the reduced resources needed. ( 引到话题，并改写题干 )S4: I see merit in both arguments, as will be discussed below. ( 表明个人观点 )

大家可以参考的一些常用的背景句式，但一定要自己进行调整创新才不会陷于模板化哦~

The past few decades/years have witnessed/seen a dramatic change in…

With the advent of..., ...has/have experienced…

In the present age, …plays an increasingly significant role in…

In the past few decades/years, ...has advanced by leaps and bounds.

Obviously, ...has revolutionised/transformed/fundamentally changed our lives.

大家学会了吗？可以试着改一下下面这段话鸭~

Some people say that the space race is a huge waste of money. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

S1: As the most inquisitive being in the world, man is always bent on exploration.

(描述背景 )

S2&S3:The early 1960s signaled the beginning of the space race. Later on, some countries have allocated billions of dollars to their space projects.

( 引到话题，并改写题干 )

S4: As for me, I vote against such projects. ( 表明个人观点 )

是不是并没有那么难呢？大家在之后的练习中也可以多多运用哦~更多作文解析内容就藏在《9分达人》写作里哦！

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