9.17雅思大作文7分范文及解析

混合类大作文，社会类话题：The unlimited use of cars may cause many problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce the problems, should we discourage people to use car？

题目来源：2020年9月17日大陆雅思大作文

题目大意：滥用汽车造成诸多问题。问题包括哪些？是否应该为减少这些问题而减少用车？音频解析，9.17大陆雅思大作文音频解析

思路解析：

这道题目包含2部分：1）汽车造成哪些问题；2）要解决这些问题，是否就一定要控制使用汽车？

先说文章结构，根据问什么答什么的原则，就是2个主体段分别回应2个部分；主体段-1分析问题；主体段-2分析办法；

关键词分析-1：题目问的是problems，所以段要列出2个问题，解释时写清楚和汽车使用的直接因果联系；

关键词分析-2：第二个问题是In order to…，should… 这里需要你探讨的是一个行为和目的之间的逻辑关系——即为了达到某个目的，是否就必然要采取某个行为；如果答案是肯定的，就要解释清楚两者之间的必然性，如果要让自己的逻辑更合理，还要解释没有其他办法；如果答案是否定的，即要指出要达到这个目的，并非只有题目提出的办法，进而给出其他办法并解释；

提纲：高分写作示范

It is true that the relentless use of vehicles has give rise to repercussions for various aspects of society. While I tend to focus on its ramifications in terms of the environment and public health, I disagree to discourage the use of private cars simply because of our apprehension about the potential pitfalls.

Of all concomitants of people’s reliance on vehicles, the most frequently mentioned one is the environmental disruption. For decades, air pollution and exhaustion of fossil fuels have long been ranked high-profile conundrums that exhaust governments, scientists and environmentalists, with greenhouse gas emissions produced by rampant use of vehicle as the major culprit. To complicate matters even more, such a life on wheels has exacerbate the sedentary lifestyle of young generations, thus leading to healthy problems such as obesity, not to mention the increasing respiratory diseases that inextricably stem from exhaust fumes.

However, to tackle these aforementioned problems does not necessarily mean the demise of vehicles. While the use of motor vehicles does take its toll on the environment and human body, it would be simplistic to confine our solution to discouraging driving while ignoring alternative measures which could be also effective to curb the tricky conditions. One option is the use of greener technology such as electronic cars, which can mitigate gas emissions and energy shortage. To deal with health problems, to educate the populace about importance fitness exercises seems to be a more fundamental approach than a simple prohibition on driving.  

It is my conclusion therefore, although the use of motor vehicles takes a toll on the ecosystem and public health, to discourage the driving trend is not the only option to tackle these problems.

相关词汇和语法结构

Repercussion  不良影响

Ramification  影响  

Pitfalls  问题

Exhaustion  耗尽  

Conundrum  问题

Greenhouse gas emissions  温室气体排放

Culprit  罪魁祸首

Sedentary lifestyle 长期坐着的生活方式  

Obesity  肥胖  

Respiratory  呼吸道的

Exhaust fumes  尾气排放 

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