雅思考试：10月24日雅思大作文解析

雅思考试：10月24日雅思大作文解析

雅思考试写作范文老师笔记

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There seems to be more and more detailed criminal description on media these days, such as beating, murdering, gun fighting, blood shedding, among others. As I see it, the excessive exposure to these criminal scenes will negatively influence newspaper readers and TV viewers, thus increasing the likelihood of their committing the same crimes in real life, but to restrict them on media is quite another story.

现在，媒体上似乎有越来越详细的犯罪描述，如殴打、谋杀、枪战、流血等。在我看来，看到太多类似犯罪场景将对报纸读者和电视观众产生负面影响，从而增加他们在现实生活中犯下同样罪行的可能性，但在媒体上限制这些描写则是另一回事。

解析

(1) 本段用列举法（提供细节）开头，然后给出自己的观点。

(2) Among others 诸如此类，等等

(3) As I see it 在我看来；我认为

(4) Excessive 过多的

(5) Exposure (to) 接触......；暴露于......之下

(6) Likelihood 可能性

(7) ...is quite another story ......是另外一回事

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To follow others is human nature, especially when it comes to doing harms to other people. This is demonstrated by the genocide Nazis committed against Jews in the Second World War. So, the more criminal scenes people witness on media, the more likely they will do the same violence to other people. Even if they are made to believe that these criminal description is fictional (rather than real), the viewers may also cultivate a negative kind of attitude toward the world they live in. They may be led to a belief that the world is far from safe and so they can take every possible measure to protect themselves, including killing others. This is actually one of the important reasons why many felonies have been committed.

跟随他人是人类本性，特别是当伤害他人时。纳粹在第二次世界大战中对犹太人实施的种族灭绝就是证明。因此，人们在媒体上目睹的犯罪场景越多，他们就越有可能对其他人实施同样的暴力。即使观众终于相信这些犯罪描述是虚构的（而不是真实的），他们也可能养成对生活其中的世界的消极态度。他们可能会相信世界远非安全，因此可以采取一切可能的措施来保护自己，包括杀害他人。这实际上是犯下许多重罪的重要原因之一。

解析

(1) 本段讨论观看太多犯罪描写会引发犯罪。

(2) Human nature 人类天性

(3) Demonstrate 证明

(4) Genocide 种族灭绝

(5) Fictional 虚构的

(6) Be led to a belief that... 被引导去相信......

(7) Felony 重罪

03

Nevertheless, to completely restrict media from giving detailed criminal description is not necessary nor desirable. Those description catering to the low taste of the audiences should, of course, be well controlled, but in many cases, it is important for newspapers or TV programs to offer detailed account of criminal acts, for either educational or aesthetic purposes. The detailed newspaper report, for instance, can arouse people's awareness of how bad a crime is so that they will take action against it; and in some TV programs, the vivid description of a criminal scene is part and parcel of its total aesthetic design.

然而，完全限制媒体提供详细的犯罪描述是不必要的，也是不可取的。当然，那些迎合观众低品味的描述应该得到很好的控制，但在许多情况下，报纸或电视节目必须为教育或审美目的详细描述犯罪行为。例如，详细的报纸报道可以唤起人们认识到犯罪的严重性，因此采取行动来打击犯罪；在一些电视节目中，对犯罪现场的生动描述是其整体审美设计的一部分。

解析

(1) 本段通过分类的办法，讨论了哪些犯罪描述应该禁止，而哪些不应该禁止。

(2) Desirable 可取的

(3) Cater to 迎合

(4) Account 叙述；描述

(5) Aesthetic 美学的

(6) Part and parcel 一部分

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To conclude, while we generally agree that media should not present too many detailed criminal scenes, those scenes for educational or aesthetic purposes should not be banned.

总之，虽然我们普遍同意媒体不应呈现太多详细的犯罪场景，但不应禁止那些用于教育或审美目的的场景。

解析

(1) 本段总结前面的讨论。

(2) Generally 总体上

(3) Present 呈现

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