12月19日雅思写作真题-年轻人崇拜负面明星，是好还是坏？

Nowadays young people are admiring media and sports stars even though they do not set a good example. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? (2020/12/19)

审题与解析

如果说中国雅思培训界还真的存在所谓押题神人，估计他也无法预测12月19日的考题，因为12月19日的考题和上一次考试，即12月 12日的考试，题材完全相同！其实，这也是题库命题的神奇所在。大家都还在观察，近来的雅思写作题目大面积重复 2015年前的考题，今天却突然重复了前一周的考题！

当然，重复之中也有些许变化。我们来比较一下：

Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? (2020/12/12)

上周考题中，两个分句之间存在一个因果关系，即“名人不是因为成就，而是因为外表和财富而出名，这给年轻人树立了坏榜样，你是否同意？”，题目的重心是在“给年轻人树立了坏榜样”。我们可以一边倒地论证“这些名人的确给年轻人树立了坏榜样”，也可以分情况讨论“有些名人的确是通过努力而出名的，这些人给年轻人树立的是好榜样；也有名人只是通过模样和财富而出名，这些人给年轻人树立的是坏榜样”。

大家再认真读一读今天的题目：

Nowadays young people are admiring media and sports stars even though they do not set a good example. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? (2020/12/19)

今天，虽然有些流量和体育明星没有树立好榜样，但年轻人还是很崇拜他们，你认为这是好还是坏？不难看出，题目的重心是在“年轻人还是很崇拜他们”，而且前提已经明确，“他们”指的是那些没有树立好榜样的名人。因此，这里，就不能进行分类讨论了。

也就是说，本次考试要求大家讨论的观点是：年轻人崇拜那些坏榜样的流量和体育明星，这个是好还是坏？就这个题目而言，我们所能采取的策略应该是很明确的，即一边倒地认为：崇拜负面影响的明星，是一种不好的现象。

确定观点后，我们需要找到论点和论据去讨论这个观点。有些流量明星一味炫耀自己的外表和豪华生活方式，会让年轻人觉得成功就是外表和财富，从而忽视内心丰富性的培养，还可能导致年轻人不顾一切追求外表和财富，从而伤害身体，甚至走向犯罪。

有些体育明星在自己的领域里取得了很大成功，然后为所欲为，置法律和道德于不顾，这会让崇拜他们的年轻人产生一种误解：即只要事业成功就可以超越道德法律约束。但事实上，道德法律约束是社会中每个人都需要遵守的。大家可以看到，在这个思路中，我们讨论了两种负面明星，一是炫耀外表和财富的流量明星（media stars），二是在自己专业领域内成功却不守法的体育明星（sports stars）。这两类明星出现在题目中，给年轻人造成不同性质的负面影响，因此，我们觉得，应该区分两类明星，展开讨论，更符合题意。

雅思写作高分范文

Nowadays our TV and computer screen is occupied by the news of all kinds of stars, positive or negative.  One notable thing is that these stars, even when they do not set a positive example, are still admired by many young people. To my mind, this is absolutely bad.

Admiring those media stars who have made themselves famous by showing off their glamorous appearance or wealth may result in many problems. One of them is that young people will try to imitate the lifestyle of their stars, thinking that success is all about appearance and money, and consequently, they will forget that true happiness resides in the richness of our inner world and in the contributions we make to other people.

Another problem is, in order to look as glamorous as their stars, some young people will spend large sums of money doing cosmetic surgery, which in the long run may be harmful to their health. What is worse, some of them may even choose to commit crimes to get the money necessary to make them as beautiful as the stars they admire.

Sports stars, if they do not behave properly, may also negatively influence young people. Maradona, who died not long ago, is just a case in point. Arguably the best football player in the world, he did not set a good example to young people by taking drugs and shooting journalists, giving his young admirers a false impression that a star can do anything regardless of the law and moral standards.

In conclusion, there may be one reason or another why stars are admired, but admiring those who do not set a good example is harmful to young people both physically, psychologically, and socially. 

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