托福写作:旅游类话题怎么举例？旅游攻略给高招！

刚结束不久的中秋➕国庆双节，想必同学们多多少少都出游了吧。在朋友圈里，看到大家有去大西北，海南，北京的，老师也是相当羡慕了。旅游的过程当中，除了欣赏美景、体验文化以外，还有一件很重要的事情可以做，那就是将出行过程中查阅的旅游攻略联系托福独立写作中的旅游类话题，形成必备素材。

托福写作｜旅游类话题怎么举例？旅游攻略给高招！

以2019年6月1日独立写作考试真题

Which of the two kinds of tourist attractions do you prefer?

Those that have only some visitors;

Those that have many visitors.为例。

很多同学拿到题目以后就会选择观点——去人少的地方游玩。因为人少的地方能更放松，更舒服（We can find peace and truly relax in places that are less visited.）这个理由的确很容易想到，但是到举具体例子的时候，难点就来了。究竟怎么样举例子呢？怎样的例子算好例子呢？

好的例子需要具备相关性和细节性。

相关性指的是举出的这个例子要紧密扣住主题句中的核心词1. Less visited 2. Find peace and relax

细节性指的是适当的细化what/where/when/why/who/how，让例子更加的具体且有画面感。

以本人非常喜欢的电影LALA Land中男主角Ryan Gosling漫步的Hermosa Beach举例。

在写这个例子之前，其实我们可以先搜搜网络上，尤其是旅游攻略中对于Hermosa Beach的介绍：

Hermosa Beach is is an oceanside community located in Los Angeles County. This beach town has a more laid-back悠闲的，懒散的, casual vibe休闲的氛围（It is less populated than its neighboring cities and offers a great deal to those coming for a visit）.

HERMOSA BEACH: THINGS TO DO

1. This 1,000 feet (300 meters) pier is an integral part of this city’s identity.  Even if we are in the area for lunch or dinner, we will make some time to stroll the pier.

2. The Strand is a 22-mile paved path extending from Pacific Palisades (close to Santa Monica) to Torrance. You can choose to walk or bike as much of the path as you want.

3. Lined with shops and ocean views, it is an exciting place to get outside and enjoy the California sunset in style.

看完了攻略素材，现在我们可以利用攻略中的素材将例子进行相关性和细节性的操作。

描写对象——what：Hermosa Beach

地点——where：located in Los Angeles County

为什么能让人放松——why：it has a more laid-back, casual vibe/It is less populated than its neighboring cities

如何让人放松——how：stroll the pier, work or bike the strand, enjoy the California sunshine

当素材预料都齐全了之后，就是组织语言，形成例子的步骤啦～

Take Hermosa Beach Pier, an oceanside community located in Los Angeles County, as an example. Compared with touristy Santa Monica, the landmark of LA, Hermosa has a more laid-back, casual vibe.  It tends to be better for people who are looking for a relaxing beach vacation because taking a stroll on the seashore sidewalk along the coast and enjoying one of the top 10 best night views in LA can be quite unforgettable.

这就是广州新航道今天想要和大家分享的利用旅游攻略来举例子的方法，大家学会了吗～

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