9月26日雅思考试写作范文解析

9月26日雅思考试写作范文解析老师笔记

01、The invention of mobile phone has enabled us to answer both work and personal calls twenty-four hours a day, seven days a week. I believe this has brought more beneficial than harmful effects on both individuals and the society as a whole.

手机的发明使我们能够每天24小时，每周7天，同时接听工作和私人电话。我相信，这对个人和整个社会而言，都是利大于弊。  

解析

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（2）Invention 发明

（3）Twenty-four hours a day, seven days a week 全天候不间断地

（4）As a whole 整个地

02、With mobile phones, we can get the first-hand information about our family and friends as well as our work in a fast and convenient way that was unimaginable in the past. Before we had mobile phones, we had to spend hours writing a letter and then travelling a few miles to the post office to send it to our friends, and then waited many days for the reply. But now it is a matter of just a few clicks. Yet the increased use of mobile phones has greatly reduced the opportunities for people to engage in face-to-face communication. Without the help of body language and facial expression, the communication over mobile phones may easily end in misunderstanding. Of course, the excessive dependence upon mobile phones for information may also contribute to the estrangement among their users.

有了手机，我们就能以一种过去难以想象的快速而方便的方式获得关于家人和朋友，以及我们工作的手信息。在有手机之前，我们不得不花几个小时写一封信，接着去邮局寄给我们的朋友，然后等很多天才收到回复。但现在只是点击几下而已。然而，手机的使用增加大大减少了人们面对面交流的机会。没有肢体语言和面部表情的帮助，手机上的交流很容易以误解结束。当然，过度依赖手机获取信息也可能导致手机使用者之间的疏远。

解析

（1）本段论述手机对个人产生的好处和坏处：好处是快捷和方便的交流；坏处是容易引起误解和隔离。

（2）Unimaginable 不可想象的

（3）Engage in 从事；进行

（4）Facial expression 面部表情

（5）End in... 结束于......

（6）Excessive 过多的

（7）Contribute to... 有助于；导致

（8）Estrangement 隔离；疏远

03、Obviously, the wide use of mobile phones has boosted the productivity and efficiency of the entire society. Let us just imagine how many lives have been saved because the hospitals can receive information in time about the seriously ill patients from the mobile phones and how many criminals have been caught because the police can receive information in time about the bad people. But with the efficiency and productivity also comes the fast tempo of life that many people find too stressful, and the scam calls are disturbing, and sometimes even destructive to people’s normal life. Fortunately, with proper education, all these problems can be effectively solved.

显然，手机的广泛使用提高了整个社会的生产力和效率。让我们想象一下，有多少人的生命被挽救了，因为医院可以及时从手机上收到关于重病患者的信息，有多少罪犯被抓住，因为警察可以及时收到关于坏人的信息。但随着效率和生产力的提高，生活节奏也加快了，对此很多人感到压力很大，同时那些诈骗电话令人不安，有时甚至对人们的正常生活造成破坏。幸运的是，通过适当的教育，所有这些问题都能得到有效解决。

解析

（1）本段讨论电话对社会的好处和坏处：好处是提升生产力和效率；坏处是生活节奏加快以及诈骗电话。但同时提出这些问题可以得到解决。

（2）Boost 促进；提高

（3）Productivity 生产力

（4）Tempo of life 生活节奏

（5）Stressful 有压力的

（6）Scam call 诈骗电话

（7）Disturbing 令人不安的

04、To conclude, though mobile phones can produce some problems for us, their positive effects on individuals and society far exceed their negative effects.       

总之，虽然手机会给我们带来一些问题，但它们对个人和社会的积极影响远远超过它们的负面影响。

解析

（1）本段给出结论：手机的积极影响远大于其负面影响。

（2）Exceed 超过

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