雅思大作文结尾段这样写就能拿到7+？

在雅思大作文中，想要让考官眼前一亮的方法有很多，其中一个较为简单的方法，就是写一个好的总结段。但是大部分考鸭在总结段常见的问题是：复述一遍开头的观点，甚至跟开头内容几乎没差别...

总结段要和开头段呼应是没错，但并不是让你复述一遍开头提出的观点。下面结合具体例子来给大家讲一讲，总结段写作的正确打开方式~

在具体举例说明之前，首先给大家介绍一下，在总结段中一定要避免踩的坑，赶紧看看你之前有没有这样做过吧！

一、总结段注意事项

1.与开头段首尾呼应，但不要重复观点

这点在开头也有提到，结尾段是对整篇文章的核心观点进行提炼总结，而这在开头段表达自己观点时可能已经提出。所以在结尾段我们要做的，除了使用同义替换词来转述开头说的话以外，结尾还应该对观点进行升华，加入自己的见解在里面。

举个简单的例子：

比如题目问你，手机对社会的影响更多是消极影响还是积极影响？

开头段你可以在简单转述题目给出现象后，表达观点只用一句“In my opinion, the negative influences outweigh the positive ones.”

到结尾段，除了重申自己的观点外还要总结为什么会有这样的观点：

In conclusion, while admitting the positive influences of people being able to connect with mobile phones, I personally contend that the downsides are more significant for both individuals and the society, considering the damage to our current life and possible long-term consequences.

2.不要出现新论点

在结尾段中，还有一点很重要的，就是暗示读者（即考官）“我已经结束了”。所以结尾段不要再出现补充论点，甚至直接推翻开头段所表达的论点，让读者以为你后面还有什么没写完的。

结尾段只要好好重复开头表达的观点，并总结主体段的分论点就可以了。当然，想要明确自己已经到总结段，可以使用一些“信号词”：

（1）it can beconcluded that…

（2）we can find that…

（3）I think it is also important to remember that

（4）the main point is to make sure that

（5）I believe that/Personally, I think that/ I would say that/ I agree that/ My view is that

3.长度不宜过长，不说废话

比其又长又复杂的结尾段，考官更喜欢简洁精练的结尾段。直接单刀直入，2-3句话结束，点明自己观点即可。这样你写起来轻松，考官看着也轻松~

好了，说完结尾段要注意的事项，下面以较为常见的三种大作文类型，给大家简单讲讲分别应该如何写结尾段~

二、总结段常见写作思路

1、一边倒型：完全同意/反对题目中的一方观点 

结尾段写作思路：再次重述个人观点，并总结前文给出的理由。

举个例子：

题目

Many people say that cooking and eating at home is better for the individual and the family than eating out in restaurants and canteens. Do you agree or disagree?

总结段

In brief, I believe that eating at home is healthy and clean. If people want to save money, eating at home is also a good choice. In addition, people can cook what they like as well. So I personally prefer eating at home.

2、双边讨论型：对双方观点的优劣进行讨论

结尾段写作思路：总结双方观点，提出自己的判断标准和结论：即倾向于更赞同某一方，还是认为双方应互补，或者认为双方都有缺陷，因此应该提出一个更合理的观点。

举个例子：

题目

Many scientists believe that intelligent life forms may exist on other planets and messages should be sent into space to contact these life forms. Other scientists think this is a bad idea because these life forms could be dangerous.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

总结段

In conclusion, I believe that both sides of the argument are reasonable. On balance, I firmly argue that unclear evidence of extra-terrestrial civilisations makes it neither possible to communicate with these life forms nor meaningful to worry about the assumed dangers. What scientists ought to do instead is endeavour to preserve the Earth for the well-being of current and future generations.

3、问题解决型：分析问题/现象产生的原因，提出解决办法 

结尾段写作思路：问题/现象的解决办法（无需再总结原因）。

举个例子：

题目

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can goverments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced

总结段

I think, therefore, that goverments need to raise this awareness in the general public. Children can be educated about environmental issues at school, but adults need to take action. Governments can encourage such action by putting taxes on packaging, such as plastic bags, by prividing recycling services and by fining households and shops that do not attempt to recycle their waste.

看完之后是不是发现，其实总结段也没那么难写？只要学会这些套路，你也能在总结段中，让考官顿时眼前一亮！